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Thursday, April 16, 2020

Character Y Chart Story

BATMAN CHARACTER Y CHART STORY

Following on from my latest blog post about the Character Y Chart.We could also make a story about the character  so I did that because that is worth 2 starts and the previous Y Chart was worth 1 so that is a total of 3 stars so that is 3 closer.This is my story about my Y Chart on batman hope you enjoy it.
Batman
Hi my name is Batman I became an orphan at the age of eight.I was very angry when my parents died so I devoted my life to crime fighting and becoming Batman.I’m well known for crime fighting with my fist and stuff I invent like the Batarang,Bat mobile,Bat flamethrower,Etc.I am from Earth and I was born in the U.S.A in Gotham City.

I wear a costume with a dark grey bat on the chest and a yellow belt where I put all my weapons with a dark black cloak that I pull out and it looks like I’m a bat.My height is 6.2 foot (188 cm) and I weigh 210 pounds (95.2 Kg).I have black hair and Blue eyes my costume is made out of bullet proof armor on the chest and then the rest of it is made out of cotton and fabric.

I’m very Depressed that my parents died when I was so young and that someone did it right in front of me.I’m very angry most of the time and don’t like people that much.I’m super strong and that is why I fight with my fists sometimes.

I drive a car called the Bat mobile. It has all sorts of stuff in it like Smoke and oil dispenser,Wheel slasher hubcaps,Missile rack,Tear gas dispensers,Ejection seats,Titanium alloy wheels and body panels,Etc.If my bat signal is flashed they I will come right away to save the day at anytime

I think that I could make the story a bit more interesting and more detail.I think that I did well with intro of the story
If you have so time you could leave a comment on what I could improve on for my next blogs Bye
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousApril 16, 2020 at 9:38 PM

    Hi Cody

    Wow - great job with your story!! You have used all the things in the Y-chart plan to do your paragraphs which means your story is really well-organised! I like how you have written it like you are Batman.

    A tip for the future is more to do with typing - when you put a comma or full stop etc. make sure you put a space afterwards so that you can see the difference between words.

    Great job on completing so much high quality work today : )

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