Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
For the next two weeks our theme is electricity and magnetism. We have to get 20 stars for the two weeks. We can chose what we want to do and what topic in the theme we want to do. I choose to do everything on the Electric Vehicles slide.
First we had to write three reasons on what car would be better for your family. Then we had to make an electric vehicle of the future and put five things features in the car that no other car has. Then we had to make an advertisement for the car. Here is mine.
I think that I did well with the features and making it detailed. I don't think I did well with the car and putting the features in.
If you have some spare time you could leave a comment on what I can improve on for my next blog post. Have a good day bye
I am really impressed with how you have listened to what we have talked about and started adding more detail to your explanations on your blog posts. It really helps people understand what you have been learning about.
I agree that you have thought of some detailed features for your car. Usually ads only have a few words and focus on a few important parts about the thing they are selling. They have to catch people's eye and get people to consider buying them. Next time you do an ad, maybe think about how you will present your information so someone would want to buy your product.
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Hi Cody
ReplyDeleteI am really impressed with how you have listened to what we have talked about and started adding more detail to your explanations on your blog posts. It really helps people understand what you have been learning about.
I agree that you have thought of some detailed features for your car. Usually ads only have a few words and focus on a few important parts about the thing they are selling. They have to catch people's eye and get people to consider buying them. Next time you do an ad, maybe think about how you will present your information so someone would want to buy your product.
Keep up the great blogging!