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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

Mars The Red Planet

This week we did work on Mars we had to build a mars rover that was usable for mars

The we had to make a post card about our made up planet from the first blog post

I think that I did well with my post card but so good with the rover/buggy
I think that I could improve on my punctuation.
If you liked this blog post make sure to leave a comment on what i could improve on for my next blog bye
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  1. AnonymousApril 16, 2020 at 10:08 AM

    Hi Cody

    Well done on going through and making the changes to your reflection and punctuation, like I suggested. Your Mars buggy has some really technical things on it that show that you have thought about the design carefully, like the fact that it is made of titanium and has LED lights (do you know what LED stands for?).

    Your blog posts are always well set out. For your future ones, I'd like to see you add more detail to the parts where you are explaining the activities so that people who aren't from our team would understand more about what your post is about. Keep up the awesome 'quarantine' work!

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